english essay editing paraphrase the sentences correct the grammar 800 words

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I’ve wrote a short essay about the American and Chinese culture, but some of the sentences are collected from other articles without paraphrasing, and some sentences might have grammar errors.

📍 Therefore, I need a help of
1. paraphrasing some sentences in this essay
2. correct the grammar
3. smoothen the sentence into more academic style

💡 At the end of every paragraphs, I have marked ‘which help do I need’. Some paragraphs need to be paraphrased, some only need to be smoothen or grammar correction!

The essay is in the attachment.

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